Post by Lizzie on Nov 22, 2014 20:51:57 GMT -5
5. Write a death scene for your character.
It was a really cold night, it wouldn't be long before Amy could reach Verdanturf Town but she didn't have that much time left. She barely escaped the attack of five grunts from Team Eternity, her mind and her body were a total mess, she was just running as fast as she could.
Aside from the venom from one of the grunt's Scolipede she had wounds all over her body, but the one from her abdomen was the most painful. It was a deep slash from a sword and it kept bleeding no matter how hard Amy pressed over the wound. She knew the end was coming for her and tears started flowing from her eyes. She couldn't run anymore, she was exhausted. Amy fell hard on her knees but there was no pain, she couldn't feel anything anymore. She crawled next to a big tree, her body was trembling… She was really cold, she didn't remember to have ever felt this cold in her 14 years of life and the blood soaked clothes felt like ice on her thin body.
Why was she alone at a moment like this? Why did she leave Luke and the others? She couldn't remember those answers, her mind was too fussy. The only thing she knew was that she missed them. Amy recalled all the sweet moments she had with Luke, Rayna and Luca, she was so happy with them. The time when Rayna hugged her… Luca's kind words… Luke's sweet words… Luke's kisses… She started sobbing. Amy was going to part from this world and she wouldn't be able to see or talk to them ever again "Why… God? Why?" she cried with the only strength she had left.
She didn't regret joining Diancie in this quest, instead she was grateful to her and Lady Aurora for allowing her to change herself from that weak girl that used to fear humans to the Amy she was today. Her only regret was leaving her team… Her friends.
Light started fading away, the cold she felt a moment ago was also disappearing, she could only see black though she could still hear some sounds… The branches of trees moving with the wind, waves splashing into the shore, and what she thought were Pokémon moving around the woods. It was really peaceful.
Her tears never stopped falling and with her last breath she muttered "I miss you… I'm… Sorry" and a second after the light in her crimson eyes was gone, she had finally left the world that had brought her so much pain and joy.
Aside from the venom from one of the grunt's Scolipede she had wounds all over her body, but the one from her abdomen was the most painful. It was a deep slash from a sword and it kept bleeding no matter how hard Amy pressed over the wound. She knew the end was coming for her and tears started flowing from her eyes. She couldn't run anymore, she was exhausted. Amy fell hard on her knees but there was no pain, she couldn't feel anything anymore. She crawled next to a big tree, her body was trembling… She was really cold, she didn't remember to have ever felt this cold in her 14 years of life and the blood soaked clothes felt like ice on her thin body.
Why was she alone at a moment like this? Why did she leave Luke and the others? She couldn't remember those answers, her mind was too fussy. The only thing she knew was that she missed them. Amy recalled all the sweet moments she had with Luke, Rayna and Luca, she was so happy with them. The time when Rayna hugged her… Luca's kind words… Luke's sweet words… Luke's kisses… She started sobbing. Amy was going to part from this world and she wouldn't be able to see or talk to them ever again "Why… God? Why?" she cried with the only strength she had left.
She didn't regret joining Diancie in this quest, instead she was grateful to her and Lady Aurora for allowing her to change herself from that weak girl that used to fear humans to the Amy she was today. Her only regret was leaving her team… Her friends.
Light started fading away, the cold she felt a moment ago was also disappearing, she could only see black though she could still hear some sounds… The branches of trees moving with the wind, waves splashing into the shore, and what she thought were Pokémon moving around the woods. It was really peaceful.
Her tears never stopped falling and with her last breath she muttered "I miss you… I'm… Sorry" and a second after the light in her crimson eyes was gone, she had finally left the world that had brought her so much pain and joy.